Low pain massively multiplayer systems: Peer review requested

[Joel Reymont]

Folks,

I wrote for http://www.gamedev.net and would like to request your  
review. I'm looking for critique and suggestions on language,  
grammar, ease of reading the article, etc. Of course you are welcome  
to point out any other mistakes as well.

The article can be found at http://wagerlabs.com/w/PowerStrip

This article will also serve as the base for my presentation at the  
Erlang conference, although I'll probably focus more on card logic  
implementation with a modified gen_fsm module.

     Thanks, Joel

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